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楓葉之影

Actually behind you( a* `: w4 o0 ], B* S

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3 }% O( a# W  P  d1 s7 S# G4 Q" o( mHas a person to wait for you
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7 e" ~3 I5 ]3 p$ ^6 f有個人在等待著妳& a4 H# w# L/ d, ~# t
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But you actually do not have the feeling - U& F0 _9 U6 ?3 W: E5 E, P

5 I$ h) ]7 J% g1 W$ vTo assume the post what emotion, u9 k0 Y+ C) `$ h/ M6 Q( d2 n! e

; W  y8 G9 S& J) Y. z* _% i但你卻沒感覺到任何情感
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Before again all nulling operations
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再一切歸零之前! r5 R- F* L1 g; F% @9 z8 M) p

/ S, T1 m5 I2 {5 RHe wants to say well to you
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, P0 Z& j# x: _他想好好對你說8 O5 C5 C3 x( t7 l. ?; h, F4 O

0 _" c4 a) T5 c: @2 O, i* {* }I like you5 |% [% c2 u2 \9 z4 U
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我喜歡妳
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But you are actually relentless departure4 x+ Z9 ]' d8 \* M
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但你卻毫不留情的離開
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7 p" j+ d2 X- q( p- j9 tI also can only look at you and others
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我也只能看著妳和別人
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! ?9 u& a# ^$ T. ]! F# JIs hugging opposite party! G' s  C0 A. a+ w) p  _  p  E0 W

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0 v- G4 [& y8 _0 z, f# S因為最近只創作到這邊~!!; w; G1 \! H% V6 `$ _5 l$ Z
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所以~
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" O* M; F/ w1 h& O2 q. N後面有在想到的話會在接上~
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