創作{About you (關於妳)}-新手 多多包含~!!

楓葉之影

Actually behind you
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其實在你背後5 N+ H" E7 r" @
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Has a person to wait for you5 m6 z5 n' ^+ T( T9 i% U
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有個人在等待著妳  Q# e: w0 N: n7 S9 L& x9 g6 L1 R' X) C
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But you actually do not have the feeling ! [/ E* a2 y  q' ?! _
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To assume the post what emotion
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8 J; D2 z9 Y8 |3 k但你卻沒感覺到任何情感
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Before again all nulling operations! ?7 L' Y: k" u/ X, O
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再一切歸零之前# M: S2 ^; O% B( W+ r

" @# \6 w! F1 X' R( B$ J5 G4 EHe wants to say well to you
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他想好好對你說2 G' X; o! [: R/ S! X; `

3 l8 l  Y. }, h* OI like you
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' \* W, {5 Y* o我喜歡妳
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But you are actually relentless departure4 l" D& s5 {/ v3 ]9 j
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但你卻毫不留情的離開
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% h0 E0 S% g' g# x& e& N+ a  h9 rI also can only look at you and others) `+ L3 {1 y0 S. z) p0 p

8 U& m- a% [2 X$ b; p5 n  z7 O我也只能看著妳和別人' V( O4 N9 Q0 Z! q" _7 H
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Is hugging opposite party2 U  F8 i+ W2 Q/ k$ b

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因為最近只創作到這邊~!!
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所以~
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後面有在想到的話會在接上~
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