創作{About you (關於妳)}-新手 多多包含~!!

楓葉之影

Actually behind you, V' e) A) w9 A
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其實在你背後
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Has a person to wait for you7 z9 |, L4 i2 M- Y! i4 F* l& A
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有個人在等待著妳
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- ^: M. U8 H: [* L. q! U4 H$ VBut you actually do not have the feeling % S0 s! Z# h, U: R+ P, C8 l  G* z4 v

8 m% D. t! c- K, E( oTo assume the post what emotion
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: I8 N0 j, h) r- R7 S1 K0 p8 ^  ]: W但你卻沒感覺到任何情感1 _$ [+ V1 R2 p

0 H/ T6 @; ^+ P! X5 f6 M1 H1 ]Before again all nulling operations3 U- M+ Y8 t; r! M' l
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再一切歸零之前
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He wants to say well to you
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  e' S' U# P" X4 R1 D( T8 f他想好好對你說
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8 M, j% |( _9 O! `* N4 ]" g* YI like you4 u2 z6 e6 E! y. e( a' m
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我喜歡妳2 f8 |( h+ ~# V: v

+ j% e+ i& ]5 w; ^( lBut you are actually relentless departure5 I8 u* C& ]; a4 p1 d, y
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但你卻毫不留情的離開
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I also can only look at you and others: u& p' l2 \5 r3 Z
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我也只能看著妳和別人1 L4 F/ ]) m" K* [" Z

1 i6 r- s' d: V* X  `4 z* UIs hugging opposite party$ _# X/ j7 X* F* H- L
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擁抱著對方
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因為最近只創作到這邊~!!
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* T/ k4 b1 ?+ G  o% l後面有在想到的話會在接上~
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